MINE demo

why is this now 50 pounds?

Thats too bad gender neutral I prefer us to be able choose our gender and pronou but that's a good game congrats on the release

Hello, I was wondering something. So when you buy the demo, will you have to but the full game as well? I played the demo when it was free. It's great & honestly worth the price for the people that didn't get a chance to play it for free. I was just wondering about the full game.

Arriba latinos!! haha, brincadeiras a parte, amei o jogo e a história! Os personagens são muito fofos e dá vontade de guardar eles num potinho. Muito feliz de ver criadorxs latinos tendo espaço e produzindo conteúdos tão bom. Um beijooo do Brasil e desejo todo o sucesso pra você e o desenvolvimento do seu jogo! 🇧🇷🙏🏻❤️

oh wasn't the game free before..?

Am I doing something wrong or?? When I go to download it, it says that "Nothing is available for download yet."

((MUCHOS SPOILERS))

Holaa, primero que todo, muchísimas gracias por esta visual novel tan hermosa, me gustó el hecho de que tenga momentos de supervivencia, eso le añade un plus con el cuál se distingue de otras vns, también las pequeñas animaciones, los finales, el diseño de personaje, los escenarios, los fondos y las acciones, lo único sí que creo que se podría mejorar es el guión? no sé cómo explicarlo porque tampoco soy doña escritora pero siento que si se pudieran añadir más cosas que no expliquen parte de la historia, por ejemplo el hecho de los padrs de Keith pudo haberse mostrado de una manera más intrínseca, de repente viendo cuadros o recuerdos, el punto al que quiero llegar es el hecho de que se pueden manejar cosas al hacerlas un poco más naturales que hablarlas directamente, me pasó igual cuando vamos con Keith al café, es todo como muy directo y al punto, y en cierto punto me agrada eso puesto que la mayoría de vns que he jugado se centran demasiado en sobredetallar una escena o sobreexplicar algo, pero también creo que debe existir cierto balance, al igual que el balance en los diálogos, creo que en el good ending (muy bueno por cierto) con Damien, es como si no hubiera pasado casi nada, o eso es lo que me da a entender el diálogo, yo la verdad estaba asustada por lo normal que hablaba, pensaba que él iba a hacer algo al portarse tan naturalmente luego de haber sido casi asesinado por Keith; eso me recuerda que vi unas CGs animadas que no entendí, cómo que la manita me hizo pensar de que Damien estaba muerto, sin embargo luego vemos que no, y otras cosas como el hecho de que YN no tenga en sí el ánimo verdadero de quedarse con Keith incluso después de haber matado a Damien, o que desde un principio cuestione su amor por él pero luego no concluye en nada, e incluso recuerdo un diálogo en el que se supone que a YN le importa tanto el hecho de incomodar a Keith que ni siquiera ve al exterior, es como...no sé, inconsistente, siento que podría mejorarse, además de que no se usa mucho el fondo del "special place" que siento yo que podría haber dado para mucho más y creo que también me dolió no haber encontrado así un Good ending todo masoquista al quedarnos con Keith incluso después de que este hiera a Damien, no? AJSDL bue, ya paro, disculpame un montón si esto se ve como una crítica destructiva, la verdad no quiero que lo pienses de esa manera, juro que esta vn ha sido una de las más completas y que más he gozado jugando, la verdad me encantó todo, pero como ya dije cierto que le faltan algunos ajustes para mejorarla aún más y dar una mejor experiencia, me faltó mencionar el jumpscare, muy muy bueno, y como dije amé el hecho de que tuvieras que estar atento a los suspiros y esconderte, fue una de mis partes favoritas y nada, si en un futuro puedo donar un poco, lo haré, sigue esforzándote y ten un muy lindo día <333

Att. Addie 

I'm having a bit of a problem downloading the game. It keeps on saying that the file is invalid and it's not letting me extract the zip file.

Me encantó el proyecto, la verdad me parece que tiene mucho potencial. Espero que crezcan y llegué a más personas. 

Me encanta la historia y el arte. 

Mi única observación es que ,como ya leí en otro comentario me gustaría que nos presentaran a Damien antes de conocer a Keith porque es muy confuso que interactuamos con él al final si no lo conocimos antes por ir a la cita con Keith. 

También me gustaría que por ejemplo pudiéramos ver el libro que nos da Keith al principio y el libro cambiara dependiendo del género de libros que elegimos. 

Sólo son sugerencias, la verdad es el primer juego de éste estilo que me ha logrado enganchar tanto.

 Tienes un concepto original, me encanta el personaje de Keith, y en general la atmósfera de la historia es única. 

After playing the full game (at least, the last update), I can say that this is AMAZING. 

(WARNING: SPOILERS ABOUT THE STORY AHEAD)

Although I find kind of strange how he starts explaining that the reason he kidnaps MC is 'cause "his dad abused his mom and he wants to protect MC" after BARELY knowing anything about the them (specially, the way they just-- accepted it as a valid reason??), I find the storytelling really good! 

Though there are a few points I'd like to do a constructive criticism, to get an smooth playthrough for anyone: First of all, if you DO choose to go on a date with him, you never get to know who even Damien is until he's dead and you just get that it was someone important to the MC, so I think that the chat with him that shows if you choose to NOT go to the date could be shown before, or as the reason the MC leaves, or something like that, so the player doesn't miss that part of the story with just one ending. 

Lastly, maybe it's because English is not my first language, but at the door scene, when the MC tries to escape with Damien, I was kinda confused 'cause it said something like "Press to open" when you actually have to click a lot of times to get it to open, so I was just holding left-click on my mouse wondering HOW does anyone get all endings, even after checking every step I made hfdshk

(Quick Note; I suppose this was intentional, but THE WOLVES SCENE. WHY CAN'T I ESCAPE NO MATTER WHAT I CHOOSE FHDKJSHFKJSD It was kinda fun trying with no ending, but MAN.)

Overall, I think this was a great game. The days pass smoothly and the art style (and in general) is absolutely beautiful, specially the backgrounds and every detail in the eyes (yes, even at the jumpscare), the voice acting is just Chef's Kiss on day one alone, the options are mostly understandable for someone in that situation (except not escaping when they could, I get the whole Stockolm Syndrome thing but GOD I wanted to strangle the MC myself fhdjsk). 

I can't wait to hear more about this game! <3

Im writing this before playing the game and I honestly love how your art looks! It looks very simple and nice! I'll edit it when I finish playing it.

Edit:

(before reading, I would like to warn you that I do spoil the story a lot so please finish playing the game before reading it so your experience doesn't get impacted!)

so here's what I think about this game... It's honestly very great! It's very cute and heartwarming and the build-up to the 18+ thing was definitely amazing (the 18+ scene felt incomplete... from my guess, it's giving me vibes that the game maker is more of a horror designer than a smut game one, which is NOT bad, but I just personally wish you'd fix it! Like, just add in the cum/climax dialogue so I can enjoy it more). Apart from the 18+ scene, the rest was a 10/10.

Horror element: 10/10 the dev definitely knows how to make the player jump, very cool and intense! 

Romance: 8/10 it was amazing, but I have it an 8 because the smut part felt like it's a last minute thing (not very satisfying unfortunately) but the art was hot! Good job, dev! 

Art: 1000/10 honestly, I really like how simple it is! I really feel nostalgic like I'm watching an old cartoon or something XD

Voice: 9/10 I honestly don't see any problem with it! He sounded very calming and even though it cuts out to the 'napping part, but I'll just let that go since the voice for me is an added extra. 

Story: 10/10 Very good build-up like I said, I just love how he goes from a very caring guy to extremely obsessive! It reminds me of myself but like more sinister and scary XD speaking of scary, after the smut I definitely enjoyed the chase scene! (I don't need to describe the smut, it's just a basic-but-lovely scene) It really does give you that intense feeling! 

Overall rating: 8/10 I honestly went into this game thinking we'd have sex but it was more story than smut- which I understand so I won't take it for granted on that behalf! 

Things to improve: 

- more voice (if it costs money, you don't have to! However, you could just do like a word or two like a couple VN games I play do. That's also fine!)

- more smut details! (C'mon dev, I wanna experience Keith more >o< I can't just just like read him getting close and then all of a sudden he just kisses me on the forehead and then fucking scares the living daylight out of me and almost kills me T-T Like, at least describe the cum in a general sense like "I can feel him finishing inside me" or something!) 

But yeah that's pretty much it! I honestly had fun playing it and I know you can improve! I can sense how good your writing skills are xP anyway, thanks for reading and have a good day! <3

Nose, simplemente me encanto el juego y mucho

Definitely an intriguing story Keith is really scary with his kind of nice and angry attitude or in other words his contradictions it's like he is a ticking time bomb lol.

Something that bothered me was that at first we had a lot choices and later just some even tho it would make more sense having more choices after he kidnapped us because the Mc is kinda too nice and too trusting for their situation and i think having also choices of more neutral and non nice one would be nice. But that's just my opinion and a suggestion which you can or not consider ^^

But because that wasn't the case i didn't really like the MC because their lack of "awareness" it would've i guess made more sense if we were close to him like a friend or an ex we didn't hate.

Oh also there were some sentences in the beginning that were kinda awkward/confusing because they didn't are grammatically correct or kinda repeated what was already said a dialogue before.

I hope you don't see my point of view as me attacking you or anything i don't intend to upset you but if my comment did i can also delete it 

Take care